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The war was over and hundreds were dead. One lone figure still sat on the battlefield next to a Black Dragon carcass. Everyone knew who it was, no one had the courage to comfort the crying one. There was little they could do in any case. The death of a familiar was a hard thing to take for any master or dear friend. Night turned into day, and the beginning of the burials began.

One lone figure approached the Black Dragon carcass and the now sleeping figure. He dropped to a knee and gently moved the sleeper. She stirred just enough to see who woke her. Fresh tears formed in her eyes when she saw who it was. He got to the other knee and took her into his arms to comfort her. She cried anew onto his shirt, mourning the death of her familiar and dear friend.

Dear, dear Sara, she heard mentally. Do not mourn my death. I served you to my last breath saving your brother Danny. I am truly sorry for viewing him as a traitor when I see now that he has worked against Bara.

She cried herself dry, leaving only bloodshot eyes. She viewed herself as a failure in her attempt to assist her familiar. Yet he had just told her that it was not her fault for his death when he knew he was facing it. Her comfort moved and lifted her face with a hand.

"He knew what he was doing," he said. "Do not fault yourself, my love. Your family is safe thanks to Raven."
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Author's Comments

I wrote this in about a couple of minutes while listening to "Heartstrings" by Savage Garden. A little idea for part of the aftermath of the battle between Bara's Vampires and Sara's Nites in my book.

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S';pretty good for its size. I recommend varying your sentence length to avoid being so choppy, also you use 'Black Dragon carcass' twice exactly like that, might wanna change it.

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:iconyaniefireheart:
That's what Raven was; a Black Dragon.

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Barbossa: "...The world used to be a bigger place."
Jack: "The world's still the same, there's less in it."

"There's never a guarantee of coming back; but passing on that's dead certain."
:iconschemilix:
Oh, right. Fair enough, but you still say black dragon carcass twice. ;3

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:iconyaniefireheart:
is not a carcass a corpse? Perhaps i used a wrong word for the time was just hours after his death.

--
Barbossa: "...The world used to be a bigger place."
Jack: "The world's still the same, there's less in it."

"There's never a guarantee of coming back; but passing on that's dead certain."
:iconschemilix:
I know but using the same word twice is best to be avoided.

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Down on yer knees, certain to please,
If you're a girl, give it a whirl,
If you're a lad, straighten yer nads!
If you want some whore-ific action,
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:iconyaniefireheart:
I'll try to remember that next time.

--
Barbossa: "...The world used to be a bigger place."
Jack: "The world's still the same, there's less in it."

"There's never a guarantee of coming back; but passing on that's dead certain."
:iconschemilix:
(:

--
Down on yer knees, certain to please,
If you're a girl, give it a whirl,
If you're a lad, straighten yer nads!
If you want some whore-ific action,
Schemilix guarantees satisfaction.

The Game.
:iconyaniefireheart:
I might be adding excerpts from both books.

--
Barbossa: "...The world used to be a bigger place."
Jack: "The world's still the same, there's less in it."

"There's never a guarantee of coming back; but passing on that's dead certain."
:iconschemilix:
(: OK.

--
Down on yer knees, certain to please,
If you're a girl, give it a whirl,
If you're a lad, straighten yer nads!
If you want some whore-ific action,
Schemilix guarantees satisfaction.

The Game.

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